@ 2008-05-08 – 05:38:07
The cheery smile,
the twinkling eyes,
the active body,
with a happy heart
and a content soul
living a calm peaceful life
Now gives way,
Way to a hurried life
with a stressed heart
and a worried soul
mirrored by dull eyes
and mirthless smile
encompassed in a diseased body
Is this what life has become?
Or is this what we think it has become?
yeah i hav 2 agree with maddy... thats his job
beat this:
A bather whose clothing was strewed,
By winds that left her quite nude,
Saw a man come along,
And unless we are wrong,
You expected this line to be lewd.
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The poem is well written, good word play but I'm sorry it doesn't seem to be a poem nor does it make any lyrical sense !!!